Could I have feedback on the art of my game? - Other Gaming Forum

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DiamondCore
Sat 16th Sep 2023

@Snatcher No, that’s not rude at all, thanks for the feedback!

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(general post, not replying to anybody):

Getting closer to being done with the concept art…
Character outline doesn’t really fit, so I’ll fix that soon

Edited on Sat 16th September, 2023 @ 03:54 by DiamondCore

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FishyS
Sat 16th Sep 2023

@DiamondCore That red looks much nicer than the first one.

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Eel
Sat 16th Sep 2023

Yeah, it’s a firm step in the right direction

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Snatcher
Sat 16th Sep 2023

@DiamondCore Yes I agree with @FishyS the red here is so much easier on the eyes.

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DiamondCore
Mon 2nd Oct 2023

@Snatcher @FishyS yeah, i agree too!

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Ive updated the concept art of what a fully realized monochromia could look like, and it looks even better:

It lacks some infill detail in the big dark red areas, some background objects and some variation in the tiles but thats about it

Edited on Mon 2nd October, 2023 @ 05:26 by DiamondCore

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Snatcher
Mon 2nd Oct 2023

@DiamondCore Oh my goodness that red is so much better!

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DiamondCore
Fri 6th Oct 2023

I've toned down the red a bit, how does it look?
I think i might tone it down a bit more, but im not sure yet.
OLD RED

NEW RED

Currently Playing: Bug Fables (the greatest game ever made), Third Playthrough
———
Gosh, the wait for Bug Fables 2 is gonna be such a long one, even worse then waiting for silksong. I’m so hyped for it to come out in like 2034!

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DiamondCore
Tue 17th Oct 2023

Im using the concept art tilemap for another random small game im making based on a mario maker level i made 2 years ago lol

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Snatcher
Tue 17th Oct 2023

@DiamondCore The red is so much better! My eyes thank you!

Is this a new stage?

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DiamondCore
Tue 17th Oct 2023

@Snatcher no problem! I agree, the red looks a lot nicer and doesn’t hurt the eyes!

I don’t know exactly what you mean by “is this a new stage”, if you’re referring to the green image, that’s an entirely different game unrelated to this one I’m making, I just figured id mention I’m putting the tileset in the concept art of what a fully-realized monochromia could look like to good use!

Currently Playing: Bug Fables (the greatest game ever made), Third Playthrough
———
Gosh, the wait for Bug Fables 2 is gonna be such a long one, even worse then waiting for silksong. I’m so hyped for it to come out in like 2034!

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Kermit1
Tue 17th Oct 2023

@DiamondCore the new red looks fantastic no joke!

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DiamondCore
Tue 17th Oct 2023

@Kermit1 thank you! I agree

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———
Gosh, the wait for Bug Fables 2 is gonna be such a long one, even worse then waiting for silksong. I’m so hyped for it to come out in like 2034!

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DiamondCore
12 hours ago

Did i just waste more time on some concept art, including redesigning the character, adding particles and adding bricks? Yes.

Do i regret it? Heck nah!

Currently Playing: Bug Fables (the greatest game ever made), Third Playthrough
———
Gosh, the wait for Bug Fables 2 is gonna be such a long one, even worse then waiting for silksong. I’m so hyped for it to come out in like 2034!